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Tonight

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DreadedOne
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0 posted 10-25-1999 05:31 AM       View Profile for DreadedOne   Email DreadedOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreadedOne

TONIGHT


Could I ever put to words
The joy of your kiss?
Have I the right to count the days
Between us that we miss?

My life I found within your eyes
And the smile on your face.
I found warmth and love inside your arms
In the strength of your embrace.

You touch with the hand of an angel.
You love with a heart of gold.
Could I be the one to listen
As the mysteries unfold?

For love to thee is sacred,
A priceless jewel secretly sought.
But love just can't be taken,
And true love can't be bought.

The magic of my nights with you
Will forever burn a light.
Within my heart, within my soul,
And on my darkest night.

I could show you a love to last forever,
Just daydreams in the night.
But if we can't share a love to last forever,
Let us love forever tonight.


The Dreaded One
© Copyright 1999 DreadedOne - All Rights Reserved
Julie
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since 08-20-99
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1 posted 10-25-1999 05:40 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I always knew the best poets came from Texas. (hee!hee) Welcome to Passions!
Lovely poem...so romantic.
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


2 posted 10-25-1999 08:26 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

I adore the last stanza. Though I am but recently arrived here myself, I welcome you.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-25-1999 10:01 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful verse.Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Michael
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4 posted 10-25-1999 06:24 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Nothing to dread here, sweet verse.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


Tara Simms
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5 posted 10-25-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Absolutely stunning!
caroline
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6 posted 10-25-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Wonderful poetry Welcome to Passions!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Denise
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7 posted 10-25-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

How beautiful! Perfect!

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Denise
thursdayschild
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8 posted 10-25-1999 11:24 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Have to put in my 2 cents from Texas too
(yee-haa Julie!)
Wonderful words of love, Dear Dread,
truly enjoyed reading this, thanks.
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


9 posted 10-26-1999 01:29 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Yes, welcome.

You will not be dreaded by me, I loved this poem, the last stanza especially.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Christopher
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10 posted 10-26-1999 02:39 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Well come indeed!
Sometimes a night can carry us through the roughest times!
Well met dreaded one!
 
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