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tempted heart
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since 1999-10-24
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0 posted 1999-10-24 07:38 PM


When in doubt of me
close your eyes
and think of me

Listen to your heart beat
That strives to let me speak

I have held you close
I have kissed you much
I have been lost in you

Open your heart's door
For I have been denied its place
I give you the key to mine though
So you will know its place

Trust in me as I do in you
Give me your love
as I hand you mine

For I know time and space
will never erase in my heart
the memory of your angelic face

© Copyright 1999 tempted heart - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
1 posted 1999-10-24 07:39 PM


The locks we hold to our own hearts, eh? Thank you for this piece.

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-24 07:46 PM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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3 posted 1999-10-24 08:42 PM


Very lovely T.H.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-10-25 04:45 PM


I liked this alot T.H.
Very sweet.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

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