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Thoughts at first light

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s.h.lim
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0 posted 10-24-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for s.h.lim   Email s.h.lim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for s.h.lim

I hold you asleep beside me this morn
feeling you close but yet so far away

I touch softly and tenderly
your eyes, your nose and tracing lovingly your soft lips
My fingers move to caress your hair
inhaling its fragrance as it fills the air

Smiling down at what is to me
a beautiful and contented face
Lost in the world of your dreams
But yet quietly still in my embrace

You cannot know how much
you mean to me
For only I know true and sincere
it has come to be

And since I can only watch you sleep
Then I shall, with all the words keep
Say them to you in the open
when you at last awaken
© Copyright 1999 s.h.lim - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 10-24-1999 07:22 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

*sigh* how very soft and lovely this is...
I like it very much.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-24-1999 07:32 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

oh, I do so like the images I get with this one......very nicely done and welcome to Passions
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-24-1999 07:44 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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4 posted 10-24-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

What lovely sentiments! I enjoyed every word!
And welcome to Passions! I know you will love it here!

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Denise
 
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