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caroline
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0 posted 10-24-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline

I've not had much time to write lately...but I do slip in and read as much as possible. This is my thanks to all of you who make it so comforting to be here.


Word Weavers

Dip your pen into my heart
Scribe your impassioned words
For in the lines you write I see
my soul displayed as art

Your poetry is every season turning
Days and nights, the sun, the moon
It is the smile of every child
It's the sigh of a lover's yearning

You light up my dreams with stardust
through verses drawn with grace
You take me on magic carpet rides
You laugh and cry and trust

I wear each letter strung like pearls
jewels of immeasurable worth
Keepsakes for a lifetime
precious as a baby's curls

Weaver of words with your quill
you paint without a brush
Every line creates a sight
That lingers with me still

© caroline 1999



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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
Julie
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1 posted 10-24-1999 06:40 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Caroline...where have you been? I have missed you so much and all of your beautiful
poetry. Hope to see more of you. oh...
I loved this piece...your words mean much.

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


RSEvans
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2 posted 10-24-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

From the lips of a bard, across my heart, and into my soul. Thank you for your introspect and praise, dear lady. But what is a poet less a dreamer of words,and into that dream we drift...

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On the wings of day-bright dreams...

Balladeer
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3 posted 10-24-1999 07:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

"I wear each letter strung like pearls...." That's beautiful, Caroline. Good to see you around. You are missed.

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There's two theories to arguin' with a woman. Neither one works.


hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-24-1999 07:20 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

caroline, we have missed you on here. What a welcome back poem to post though. This was very well told, I enjoyed it a lot. Love the line Balladeer pointed out and also:
Your poetry is every season turning




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This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides
Pepper
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5 posted 10-24-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

A very beautiful tribute.....
Loved this much Caroline.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Watcher666
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6 posted 10-24-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much!! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Martie
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7 posted 10-24-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This caught my heart and closed it in the friendships that poems make.
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 10-24-1999 07:55 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Caroline: You Too!
DreamEvil
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9 posted 10-24-1999 07:59 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Caroline, you should include yourself in your verse as you do the same for us all.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

IsabelleSkye
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10 posted 10-24-1999 08:02 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

This was lovely. Very nice use of words...to describe an emotion felt......You're just a "Word Weaver!"

Izzzzzzzy

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II
Nan
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11 posted 10-24-1999 08:22 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

How nice to see you caroline - and with a wonderful work to grace us...
Denise
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12 posted 10-24-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Caroline.

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Denise
caroline
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13 posted 10-25-1999 08:02 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

The thanks go to all of you who inspired this piece...I've missed you too!



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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

U K Hero
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14 posted 10-29-1999 04:26 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

What can I say except brilliant, the words flow so well as if strung together one by one as if it were a peal necklace.
Michael
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15 posted 10-29-1999 04:35 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Caroline, I have missed hearing from you. This is beautiful....and I agree with Dream, you have have given much to all of us.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


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