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Sunshine
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0 posted 10-24-1999 05:25 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

To Thee

To be to thee as a glass ripple
through the window of your soul,
gazing through wavy pane aged
a ripple cast from old.

To be to thee that ripple,
from a child’s skipped rock,
skip once, twice, touch, splash,
then ripple away from the dock.

To be a shadowy ruffling of sound
wafting to your inner ear,
to softly share a sensual rippling
a heart’s song you hold dear.

To be yon wavelet of golden ray
and seek thou in pensive light,
the day’s last warmth safe in thee,
and share then evensong’s delight.

To be a ripple of love’s allure,
coursing, sweeping through our blood,
enfold the ripples of thou’s touch,
through the undulating veil of love.

©KRJ
24 October 1999


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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Skyfyre
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1 posted 10-24-1999 05:28 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

What a peaceful, warm feeling this one left me with ... thank you for this gift, Sunshine.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
Martie
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2 posted 10-24-1999 05:33 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I loved this. It got me thinking about ripples. I might have to write a poem.
Pepper
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3 posted 10-24-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Lovely!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Watcher666
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4 posted 10-24-1999 07:28 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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5 posted 10-24-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

This felt like the old "greats". I love their writing! And yours as well, thanks for the beautiful read.
Izzzzzzy

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II
RSEvans
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6 posted 10-24-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Alluring to the end. Each line better than the previous. What a build! More...More!

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No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space...
Nan
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7 posted 10-24-1999 08:07 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Simply AWESOME!!!

caroline
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8 posted 10-24-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

A marvelous read, Sunshine! I love it!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Serain
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9 posted 10-24-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Serain   Email Serain   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Serain

i am not a poet or writer
i have been reading pip for about 4 months and have always enjoyed reading whatever you have written
you are so upbeat
thanks
Denise
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10 posted 10-24-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ditto! Very lovely, Sunshine. I enjoyed this.

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Denise
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11 posted 10-25-1999 09:15 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I am simply overwhelmed by all of the responses. You especially know that your comments mean very much to me, for you don't post anything without truly meaning it!
Munda
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12 posted 10-25-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Wonderful ! As always. : )
Sunshine
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13 posted 10-25-1999 01:40 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Thank you Munda, for reading.
Severn
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14 posted 10-25-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow Sunshine - this is exquisite!
Sunshine
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15 posted 10-26-1999 09:37 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Severn, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.
tori
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16 posted 10-26-1999 10:45 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Very well writen SS.. enjoyed !!
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