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Our Noahs arc

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Seymour Tabin
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Our Noahs arc

Stars recite like floating lights
Lighting the chasm of the night.
And lodestar the infinite way
Extending the finite of day.

We commute on a ship of thoughts
Weather happy or over wrought.
Traveling at the speed of relief.
To attain a seat of belief.

We seek the fantasy of love
In the infinite up above.
Launching our own Noahs arc
To find a park to disembark.

The island is a mystic place
A mantic of extended space.
Different to each this primal beach.
And therefore difficult to reach.

It is a vivid, built of ID and
A little bit back of the eyelid.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-24-1999 04:52 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Excellent!! Loved this!!

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Martie
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A ship of thougths, what a wonderful concept. I liked this very much.
Julie
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3 posted 10-24-1999 05:06 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Reminds me of all of here at Passions. Really liked this very very much!

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
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4 posted 10-24-1999 05:13 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

The last couplet was quite clever -- made me smile, it did. Thanks for sharing!

--Kess

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We commute on a ship of thoughts

very nice line
Seymour Tabin
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Watcher,Martie, Julie, sky and hoot,
I thank you one and all You made my day.
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Wonderful, Seymour! 'We commute on a ship of thoughts', great line and the next as well, very clever play on words. I also loved 'Traveling at the speed of relief'. Well...I just loved the whole piece!

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8 posted 10-24-1999 11:43 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
Thank you for reading and understanding the poem.
 
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