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Where are You?

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DanMc
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0 posted 10-24-1999 01:20 PM       View Profile for DanMc   Email DanMc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DanMc's Home Page   View IP for DanMc

Where Are You?


How long must I search?
Oh, lonely heart of mine?
Or am I doomed to write sad poems that rhyme?

What else can I do, when you
Start pounding?
If I do nothing, then I'm left waiting.

So many times I've followed you,
In search of my fait.
Where could you be, my friend, my lover,
And soulmate.


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1 posted 10-24-1999 01:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice. I could feel the longing in this one!

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Liked this much.

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