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DanMc
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0 posted 10-24-1999 01:15 PM       View Profile for DanMc   Email DanMc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DanMc's Home Page   View IP for DanMc

Unconscious

Why do you come to me in such grace?
You stand before me in satin and lace.
Could this be a glimpse of what may be?
I pray next we meet,
I'm not asleep.

WHy do I need to see you each night.
Cause we never yell and call each other names or fight.
Could we ever be two hearts that beat as one?
Well I'm sure you'll say no before I'm done.

Why do you come to me each night,
But only in my dreams?
I'm sure now you know and will agree,
That you don't belong in reality.
Your just my fantacy.


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1 posted 10-24-1999 01:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great Dan! I thoroughly enjoyed this! And welcome to Passions!

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Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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May your dreams become reality...
I like this much.

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


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