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Reason For Hope

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 10-24-1999 04:19 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The scarring of my heart proceeds apace.
Impassioned venom my words do relate.
Fantasies of love comprise my disgrace.
Loyalty lies with the self I do hate.

On ignorance will happiness depend.
Untold suffering welcomes my embrace.
For the love of my life I will contend.
In daydreams I see her angelic face.

Love engulfs the heart in winding despair.
Betrayal of self is highest treason.
For one thing in life do I truly care.
I reached out for love against all reason.

Unwarranted hope, hate cannot destroy.
For her, wicked spite does part like a veil.
Forgiveness I've learned to rightly employ.
Here begins, not ends, my hardest travail.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


1 posted 10-24-1999 08:32 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

You do your Lady tribute, sir. There is no greater hope than love.

--K.

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
Watcher666
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2 posted 10-24-1999 11:35 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Love is a perilous juorney,but we worth the trials.Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Ohme
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3 posted 10-24-1999 12:36 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


Beautifully said, DreanEvil. I liked this one very much.
Marilyn
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4 posted 10-24-1999 02:44 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Darkness and light. Hope through misery. Your talent astounds me Sir.
Michael
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5 posted 10-24-1999 06:43 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ah, well said my friend. feeling I can truly rleate to.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


DreamEvil
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6 posted 10-25-1999 02:09 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Twas the closest I could come to true hope last night. Thank you much.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


7 posted 10-25-1999 03:27 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Glad to see you still have at least a glimmer of hope, my friend. Great poem.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
DreadedOne
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8 posted 10-25-1999 05:01 AM       View Profile for DreadedOne   Email DreadedOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreadedOne

Tales of pain...I likes.


Dread
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


9 posted 10-25-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Indeed brother, the journey has just begun...I empatize.
Alwye
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In the space between moments


10 posted 10-25-1999 10:31 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Well said, my friend..I like the darkness, yet the hope that are so perfectly woven here..good work.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 10-25-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DE,
Take comfort in your abilities
They offers certain stabilities.
Blackdrake
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since 07-23-99
Posts 85
Depends on the day :)


12 posted 10-26-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Blackdrake   Email Blackdrake   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blackdrake

Very good Dream. It has been a while since i have had the pleasure of your writing.
i am not dissapointed.
I hope you will check out my new one going up tommorow.

I look forward to your imput.

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Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light
tori
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13 posted 10-27-1999 02:30 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

DE... Loved it.... bravo..
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