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Dangerous Love

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Ominous
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0 posted 10-24-1999 02:27 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

She comes upon,
the gates of hell.
She's here for him,
her soul to sell.

She loved him much,
and so to save his life,
she travelled here,
to become Hate's wife.

She gave up hers,
in order to save his.
And when they last parted,
she realized what love is.

Now she looks upon these words,
trembling with fear.
'Abandon all hope,
ye who enter here.'

The tears, they start to flow,
down her lovely cheek.
She wipes them all away,
afraid of looking weak.

The gates they start to sway,
revealing the world beyond.
The moment she walks through,
the world she knows is gone.

Knowing this is her mission,
the reason of her life itself.
She enters into that world of hate,
her hopes and dreams, they melt.

The transition now has begun,
her earthy beauty fades,
her mind no longer belongs to her,
she's lost within a haze.

Now she stands here,
wings of black and eyes of red.
It's that horrible drug hate,
she has been fed.

She throws back her head and wails,
she looks high up above.
The she strangely smiles.
"I did this all for Love."


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Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-24-1999 02:30 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Awesomely crafted tale my friend, worth the wait it is.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Systematic Decay
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2 posted 10-24-1999 02:31 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Well done. I like it much.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-24-1999 02:55 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Ominous
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4 posted 10-25-1999 12:08 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

I greatly thank the three of you.

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Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light

DreadedOne
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5 posted 10-25-1999 05:27 AM       View Profile for DreadedOne   Email DreadedOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreadedOne

I think all love is dangerous, great poem though.
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