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Master
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0 posted 10-23-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Hunger hinders healing hours
Sick, since Sunday sitting still
Feeling funny; funky flowers
Spread the sickening smell of swill

Coughing crudely, crying coarsely
Sending swirling sneezes still
Moaning meekly, missing mostly
Sultry sunlight’s silent spill


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-23-1999 11:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hope you're feeling better soon!
Great poem!

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Denise
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2 posted 10-23-1999 11:58 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Awwww feel better! Liked this!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Master
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3 posted 10-24-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks, I hope you know the Muse is contageoues, so keep away from the screen!
Ohme
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4 posted 10-24-1999 12:25 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Wish you better health quickly.
Master
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5 posted 10-24-1999 05:34 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Ohmy! thanks Ohme!
Skyfyre
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6 posted 10-24-1999 05:38 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

"Sultry sunlight's silent spill"

These words flowed like silk off my tongue as I read them. A beautiful line and a lovely poem as well.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
Julie
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7 posted 10-24-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Sounds like you have that nasty cold that's going around...hope you feel better soon. Nice work on the poem.

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


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8 posted 10-24-1999 06:36 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Feel better soon, my friend

And throw out those funky flowers! Sounds like they are past their prime! LOL

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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Keep your distance there Master...don't wish to be sick for next week Get well soon
 
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