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Watcher666
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0 posted 10-23-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Peeping Tom you call me
Each and everyone I see
Ever will you want to know?
Perhaps the real me I'll come to show

In turning of the wheel
Not a one of you will feel
Gaining momentum with each turn
Tonight's Watchers time to burn

Only a few of you know
My heart which I never show
I see far into the night
So little is there left to fight

Friends follow where I go
Even those who do not know
My mind not and neither my heart
A day a night, a time to start

Lament for a day lost
Each carries it's own cost



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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
© Copyright 1999 Watcher666 - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-23-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great acrostic Watcher! And great poem too!


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EnglishRose
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2 posted 10-23-1999 11:02 PM       View Profile for EnglishRose   Email EnglishRose   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for EnglishRose

really good job, liked it a lot sis,
DreamEvil
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3 posted 10-24-1999 01:25 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis well done indeed my friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
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Systematic Decay
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4 posted 10-24-1999 02:24 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Very nice poem...I really need to watch for acrostics, because this is the second time I never would have noticed it if a reply didn't point it out.

BTW....I don't have my ICQ yet, but I am at home, on the comp (duh), listening to my mom snore, and cursing AOL.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Ohme
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5 posted 10-24-1999 12:18 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Watcher, you made it look so easy I might want to try it myself. But I know I would have problems starting each line with correct letter. Very nicely done. As you can tell I am envious of your ability.
Watcher666
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6 posted 10-24-1999 03:34 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Thank-You all for reading.Glad you enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 10-24-1999 04:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watcher,
Good job enjoyed the read.
Balladeer
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8 posted 10-24-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Nice job, Watcher.
Nan
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9 posted 10-24-1999 07:12 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Your final couplet says it beautifully, Watcher..
caroline
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10 posted 10-24-1999 07:17 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is excellent! I agree with Nan on your final couplet

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Don Juan de Feu
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11 posted 10-25-1999 12:26 AM       View Profile for Don Juan de Feu   Email Don Juan de Feu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Don Juan de Feu

yessssssssss!!

DJ
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12 posted 10-25-1999 12:38 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Great poem Watcher.
Enjoyed the read.

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
 
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