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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-23-1999 10:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Each day

She enchants me like morning's dew
With new born shadows passing thru.
Like odors, of the dawn of morn
From scented flowers still unborn.

She delights me with downy gay
Like bobbing butterflies at play.
She chitchats like the birds that sing
Their wakefulness of new born spring.

She steeps her humor like a tea
And serves the doses guiltlessly.
With plumb uniqueness of a child
And wisdom of the undefiled.

She banquets me. A shameless spread.
And though enchantment is inbred
Creation of our common needs
I am in awe, her common deeds.

A constant play of Santa Claus
And I a child of wild applause.


[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 10-24-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-23-1999 10:08 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful,so sweet! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Denise
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2 posted 10-23-1999 10:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Seymour this is enchanting! I absolutely love it!

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Denise
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3 posted 10-23-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It is incredible to see how far you have come, Sy. Beautiful work here.
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 10-24-1999 03:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watcher,
Thank you for the sweet.
Denise,
Thank you for the enchanting.
Balladeer,
And thank you for the beautiful work.
Martie
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5 posted 10-24-1999 04:55 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh, this was so good. You sing such a sweet song.
Skyfyre
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6 posted 10-24-1999 05:04 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Oh, this was positively magical! What a beautiful picture you have painted here, Mr. Tabin. Applause is in order.

--K.

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
Nan
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7 posted 10-24-1999 07:16 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I've got to agree with M&M here, Sy...
caroline
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8 posted 10-24-1999 07:19 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Seymore this is fantastic...you just keep getting better and better! I am a true fan of your poetry!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 10-24-1999 07:34 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Seymore, what a nice job you did with this piece. Nothing more precious than love that has stood the test of time. You and your wife are very lucky to feel this way about each other after so many years May you share many more
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-24-1999 09:10 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Martie,
Sings sweet is good. thank you.
sky,
Magical is even better, thank you
Nan,
I treasure your remarks, thank you.
Caroline,
Fantastic is splended, thank you.
Hoot,
I always look for your remarks, thank you.
DreadedOne
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11 posted 10-25-1999 05:23 AM       View Profile for DreadedOne   Email DreadedOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreadedOne

Great poem, a true delight to read.


Dread
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 10-25-1999 01:25 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dread,
Thank you for the read and comment.
Michael
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13 posted 10-25-1999 01:31 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wonderful, indeed, Seymour.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


Pepper
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14 posted 10-25-1999 02:09 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Delightful Sy!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
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15 posted 10-25-1999 02:13 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Big smiles, Seymour... Well done!
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 10-25-1999 05:32 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael,
Thanks for the wonderful.
Pepper'
thanks for the delightful.
Suthern,
thanks for the smiles.
 
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