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Dark Angel
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0 posted 1999-10-23 09:42 PM


Daniel, My Pride and Joy!


D aniel my pride, my Joy, my son
A n Angel from the Holy Lord above
N ever you fear my precious little one
I am always here to guide you, my love
E very single moment and day of my life
L oving you even when you might be in strife

M ischevious, sweet and charming as you are
I watch you when you sleep in your warm bed
C aressing you, my Angel, my Darling, my star
H umbly kiss Good Night, your sweet head
A s I think about the day we've just had
E very moment, placed in my heart,so bold
L ater to reminisce,to keep me company,when I'm old


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-10-23 09:48 PM


Seems the acrostic phenomenon is catching on. Well done soul-sib, 'tis an excellent tribute.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-23 09:56 PM


This is so sweet and a great acrostic! Our little ones certainly bring out the sweetness in us, don't they?

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Denise

Moonshine
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3 posted 1999-10-23 09:57 PM


Beautiful DA - Daniel is lucky to have you as his Mum : )
Watcher666
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4 posted 1999-10-23 10:05 PM


This was so sweet! Loved it!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Dark Angel
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5 posted 1999-10-23 10:11 PM


Soul-brother, thank you so much
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Yes Denise they do thanks so much for your lovley comment.
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Thank you Moonshine, I'm lucky to have him as my son.
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Watcher, thank you so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Munda
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6 posted 1999-10-23 10:30 PM


Dark Angel, I loved this so much !
WhtDove
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7 posted 1999-10-23 10:46 PM


Excellent my friend! I like the way you did this! Bless that little boy!
EnglishRose
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8 posted 1999-10-23 11:13 PM


how true it is when you have kid,s
I really liked it a lot,

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"A Rose by any other name..."

Dark Angel
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9 posted 1999-10-24 04:44 AM


Munda, thank you so much
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WhtDove, Thank you Angel, your comments always mean so much to me
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EnglishRose, thank you so much for your lovely comment

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 1999-10-24 11:01 AM


Nicely done Dark Angel, I'm sure he must be proud
Pepper
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11 posted 1999-10-24 11:07 AM


So very sweet DA!!
Loved this much.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Dark Angel
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12 posted 1999-10-24 04:22 PM


Ruth, and Pepper, thank you both very much for your lovely comment

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Martie
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13 posted 1999-10-24 04:49 PM


Such loving words, so beautifully said.
Dark Angel
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14 posted 1999-10-26 07:34 AM


Martie, thank you so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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