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Denise
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0 posted 10-23-1999 09:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

If you but lift Me up you'll see
I'll draw all men unto Me;
If you convey My heart to all
Then needy souls will heed My call;
If you preserve the unity
Then all the world will surely see
My love is real and will believe
Yes, that I AM a sweet reprieve
From guilt and shame and they'll find rest
And hope and peace...forever blest.

If you but lift My Name on high
The world shall hear of El Shaddai.


12/98

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1 posted 10-23-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent, Denise. Great style.
Julie
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2 posted 10-23-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Had to take two helpings of this...it was sooo good.

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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


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3 posted 10-23-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Indeed Denise, great ! Well done !
WhtDove
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4 posted 10-23-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

God Almighty that's for sure! Enjoyed this one Denise! Great job!!! Loved it!
Denise
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5 posted 10-24-1999 12:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Balladeer, Julie, Munda and WhtDove - thank you all for your read and kind comments.
Goodnight!

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Amen. Just beautiful Denise! A wonderful read to start off my Sunday........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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7 posted 10-24-1999 01:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Pepper, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Enjoy the rest of your Sunday, as well!

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Denise
DanMc
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8 posted 10-24-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for DanMc   Email DanMc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DanMc's Home Page   View IP for DanMc

This is a very nice poem

you are very sweet / have a nice day

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Denise
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9 posted 10-24-1999 02:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Dan! I'm glad that you liked it!


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10 posted 10-27-1999 03:21 AM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

HA applauds!!
RSEvans
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11 posted 10-27-1999 06:31 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

I loved it. I especially liked the capitalized I AM. Good work.

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No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space...
Denise
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12 posted 10-27-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Why thank you so kindly, HA and RS! So glad you enjoyed it!

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Isis
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13 posted 10-27-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Great job Denise!! I think everyone is improving in leaps and bounds since my absence,..

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
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Andrew Scott
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Well Done Lady D. Thanks for sharing.
Verma
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15 posted 10-27-1999 06:35 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Very Well put together.......
PoeticPreacher
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What depth! What revelation veiled in simple rhyme. Keep letting Him write thru you.
Denise
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17 posted 10-27-1999 08:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Isis, Andrew, Verma and Poetic Preacher, thank you all for reading and commenting. I'm always appreciative!

Isis, welcome back, you have been missed! This is one of my earlier poems from last year that I just recently felt moved to share.

Poetic Preacher, that is truly my heart's desire. But these are not my words at all, They are His, just paraphrased a little! Wish I did have such depth! I just borrow His! Thanks again! Oh, I tried to sign your guest book at your site but couldn't get in. I'll try again later!

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Denise
 
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