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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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If you but lift Me up you'll see I'll draw all men unto Me; If you convey My heart to all Then needy souls will heed My call; If you preserve the unity Then all the world will surely see My love is real and will believe Yes, that I AM a sweet reprieve From guilt and shame and they'll find rest And hope and peace...forever blest. If you but lift My Name on high The world shall hear of El Shaddai. 12/98 ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, Denise. Great style. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Had to take two helpings of this...it was sooo good. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us. >Stendhal |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Indeed Denise, great ! Well done ! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
God Almighty that's for sure! Enjoyed this one Denise! Great job!!! Loved it! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Balladeer, Julie, Munda and WhtDove - thank you all for your read and kind comments. Goodnight!  ------------------ Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Amen. Just beautiful Denise! A wonderful read to start off my Sunday........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Pepper, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Enjoy the rest of your Sunday, as well! ------------------ Denise |
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DanMc Junior Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 10Canada |
This is a very nice poem you are very sweet / have a nice day ------------------ Daniel McIntosh |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Dan! I'm glad that you liked it! ------------------ Denise |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
HA applauds!! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I loved it. I especially liked the capitalized I AM. Good work. ------------------ No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why thank you so kindly, HA and RS! So glad you enjoyed it! ------------------ Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great job Denise!! I think everyone is improving in leaps and bounds since my absence,..------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well Done Lady D. Thanks for sharing. |
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Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
Very Well put together....... |
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PoeticPreacher Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 28jkljkj |
What depth! What revelation veiled in simple rhyme. Keep letting Him write thru you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Isis, Andrew, Verma and Poetic Preacher, thank you all for reading and commenting. I'm always appreciative! Isis, welcome back, you have been missed! This is one of my earlier poems from last year that I just recently felt moved to share. Poetic Preacher, that is truly my heart's desire. But these are not my words at all, They are His, just paraphrased a little! Wish I did have such depth! I just borrow His!  Thanks again! Oh, I tried to sign your guest book at your site but couldn't get in. I'll try again later! ------------------ Denise |
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