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IsabelleSkye
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0 posted 10-23-1999 11:53 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for IsabelleSkye

I
fall
freely
spilling
over
you
like
a
waterfall
of
emotion

tumbling down
I am drawn into the vortex
of your love
carried by the whirpool
of intensity
til together
we are mingled with the stars
and lifted by our love

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II
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Pepper
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1 posted 10-23-1999 12:23 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Oh, Isabelle, so beautiful.


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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Michael
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2 posted 10-23-1999 12:27 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

oooh, I like this one...very sensual imagery.
Good poem, izzy.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


Watcher666
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3 posted 10-23-1999 12:45 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely! Liked this much!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Ohme
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4 posted 10-23-1999 01:52 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


The imagery is beautiful. Like this a lot.
Alwye
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5 posted 10-23-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful..your work always conveys emotion in such wonderful, unique ways, Izzy..I love this.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Denise
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6 posted 10-23-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow, what a visual! Great one, Izzy, really loved it!

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Denise
Nan
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7 posted 10-24-1999 10:38 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Yeah Izzy!!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-24-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

You go girl....this is great!
Skyfyre
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9 posted 10-24-1999 05:26 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Isabelle, this was orgasmic. Does anyone have some icewater??

Exquisite writing.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
IsabelleSkye
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10 posted 10-24-1999 07:00 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Sky.....that WAS my intent! *wink*
glad ya got what I was meaning
Izzzzzzzzy
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11 posted 10-24-1999 07:03 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

A cascade of praise? I loved this.

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On the wings of day-bright dreams...

caroline
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12 posted 10-24-1999 07:07 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Ahhhh Izzy....eloquent and sensual and...why didn't I write this??

Beautifully done!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

 
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