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Sunset Song

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RSEvans
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0 posted 10-23-1999 01:30 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RSEvans

The tide rolls in,
To greet the din,
Caused by the death of day.
And here I sit,
Forstalling it,
I still have to play
Upon the strings
Of day-bright dreams
And wings of sunset hosts.
And the song I'll sing
To you I'll bring;
To the one I love the most.

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Michael
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1 posted 10-23-1999 01:40 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful little song. Has a good flow to it. I love the line:

Upon the strings
Of day-bright dreams

Well done.


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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



Watcher666
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2 posted 10-23-1999 04:53 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much! Well done!

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Nan
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3 posted 10-23-1999 09:58 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Your work is very interesting, RSE - I'm looking forward to reading more...
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 10-23-1999 02:29 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You just got the compliment of all compliments from Miss Nan herself!! (ahem) She happens to be quite picky as she is a teacher, and a darn good nit-pick on poetry too! hehe
As I'm learning quickly myself, your poetry has a really interesting story behind it....I see your thoughts run deep too.....BRAVO! I also look forward to more of your posts !!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

Denise
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5 posted 10-23-1999 05:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another beauty!

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6 posted 10-23-1999 06:27 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Something I'd like to sing along to!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

RSEvans
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7 posted 10-23-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Thanks guys, for making me feel at home.

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On the wings of day-bright dreams...

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