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RSEvans
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0 posted 10-23-1999 01:26 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RSEvans

Darkness draws its' ebony curtain
On the play of the day.
Birds deepen their tones,
Shortening the luster of their songs.
Dawn's twin fades,
Taking the color from the sky,
Leaving only shades of grey,
And no promise of sunrise.
Life stills,
And I prepare for slumber.
And I,
I close my eyes.

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1 posted 10-23-1999 04:49 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this one! Nicely done.

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-23-1999 10:54 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful...welcome to passions
Michael
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3 posted 10-23-1999 10:56 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful tribute to "Dawn's twin".
Loved it.

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Is all that we see or seem
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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 10-23-1999 11:01 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RSEvans,
Well done, enjoyed the read.
Pepper
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5 posted 10-23-1999 12:54 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Lovely!

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poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 10-23-1999 02:10 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hey you ! I didn't know you WRITE poetry!!?? I'm in awe that this runs in the family...deeper than I thought !! hehe Very nice piece here! So glad to see your work! And yes, welcome aboard - - although I'll warn you and the wife now, it's very very addicting!! LOL


**** HEY EVERYBODY !! This man is family of mine !! LOL Uh-oh...I just ruined his reputation before he even had a chance !! hehehe His mom just married my dad, and made him the happiest man alive !! Isn't that cool ???

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7 posted 10-23-1999 05:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Lovely visual..

HUGS

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8 posted 10-24-1999 12:10 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful! Very well done!

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9 posted 11-05-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So peaceful and secure is this twilight you painted. Nicely done.
WhtDove
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10 posted 11-06-1999 12:04 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Lovely and well done!
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ah...those shades of gray...sigh
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