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Pebbles |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA 
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Walking through Time Pebbles 'neath my feet Wait for my passing, My absence do they greet. For, if my stride did halt, Bruised would some be, And others left unturned, Never touched by me. While pebbles wait yet for me, And Darkness fades from Sun, I must continue walking 'Til my walking days are done. ------------------ THE Webmaster |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A very interesting perspective, webmaster. Indeed, if we were to halt our walk some would be bruised...but it's those lying ahead of us who we'd never meet where the greatest hurt would lie. Wonderful allusion here. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Good reading here.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very interesting and thought provoking....... Liked this much..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSEvans, Agree with all the above, well done. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Robert, I really like this alot! I can't believe you didn't tell me you WRITE !! I had no idea, and now what a wonderful surprise to be here in this forum together! Makes it a warmer place, knowing the family is lurking around here too !!  This is a really nice piece, deep with meaning - - great job! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautifully done! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a very nicely woven metaphor, Robert... |
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