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RSEvans
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0 posted 10-23-1999 01:24 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RSEvans

Walking through Time
Pebbles 'neath my feet
Wait for my passing,
My absence do they greet.
For, if my stride did halt,
Bruised would some be,
And others left unturned,
Never touched by me.
While pebbles wait yet for me,
And Darkness fades from Sun,
I must continue walking
'Til my walking days are done.

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1 posted 10-23-1999 01:30 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A very interesting perspective, webmaster.
Indeed, if we were to halt our walk some would be bruised...but it's those lying ahead of us who we'd never meet where the greatest hurt would lie. Wonderful allusion here.

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2 posted 10-23-1999 04:51 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Good reading here.Well done!

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3 posted 10-23-1999 10:32 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very interesting and thought provoking.......
Liked this much.....

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4 posted 10-23-1999 11:41 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RSEvans,
Agree with all the above, well done.
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 10-23-1999 02:26 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Robert, I really like this alot! I can't believe you didn't tell me you WRITE !! I had no idea, and now what a wonderful surprise to be here in this forum together! Makes it a warmer place, knowing the family is lurking around here too !! This is a really nice piece, deep with meaning - - great job!
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6 posted 10-23-1999 05:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautifully done!

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7 posted 10-24-1999 05:27 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is a very nicely woven metaphor, Robert...
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