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Kitty**
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0 posted 1999-10-23 12:29 PM



Basking in the afterglow:
Of my first thought of you.
That little tingle that I had,
Flooded me through and through.

Contented in the afterglow:
Of us becoming friends.
Sharing secrets together,
Our ears were there to lend.

Drifting in the afterglow:
When things begin to change.
You had problems, I had mine,
And my life, I rearranged.

Returning to the afterglow:
When our lives settled down.
During it all we stayed in touch.
Better friends could not be found.

Consumed by the afterglow:
When our desire begin to burn.
We gave into our temptation,
And that is when I learned.

Rejoicing in the afterglow:
Of making love sweet and slow.
And of finally knowing the truth,
When it was time for you to go.

Now the afterglow diminishes:
Though my love for you was true.
It breaks my heart to know,
You didn't feel the way I do.

The afterglow still illuminates:
Though lovers we won't be.
I will always be here for you,
As I know, you are for me!

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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1 posted 1999-10-23 02:07 AM


Wow, Kitty, this is so sweet ans so sad, too. Excellent piece.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?




Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-23 04:59 AM


Sad,but so beautiful.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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3 posted 1999-10-24 12:14 PM


This is lovely, Kitty.

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Denise

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