Sitting in Michael's Lap
I love the rain ...
For that reason alone, this poem is well worth the read. However, there are many other reasons why I had to read it several times over, relishing it more each time. My favorite of all is how you began and ended with the same line: it completed the image of the mind wandering, then coming back to reality. I am impressed!
You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.