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What to You Can I Give?
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What to You Can I Give? |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon 
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In a misty, hazy dream, I reach for you. Hazel eyes open sleepily, lips whisper "I love you" The smile on your face lets me know your love. I am so grateful for you. Thank the Lord above. You are everything from friendship to security. You light up my days and star-stud my dreams. You hold me so tight and it feels sooo good. We've been together so long. It feels as it should. You are my lover, my outlaw, my husband, my life. You are every heartbeat through happiness and strife. You have been my breath when I need a voice. You are there to support me through every choice. You hold me up when I want to fall. You make me feel like a porcelain doll You laugh with me and help me live. Tell me love, what to you can I give? Wild Child 8/99 ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
Nice stuff here. Great piece I'll look for more. Keep writing. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, you can start by giving him this poem...it would be an honor to any man to recieve something like this. A wonderful tribute and beautiful poem. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
This is so perfect. I'd put the poem in a place where he would easily find it and then wait for his reaction. And if you get no reaction, you didn't put it where he could find it. Lovely, WildChild |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo beautiful! I'm sure he'll love it!  ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds to me like he's getting an awful lot already. Excellent thought. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Simply beautiful! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I did give this to him and his eyes started to well up. (he's very sentimental at times for such a mean lookin' biker type) He loved it and said all he wanted was for me to love him and never stop. That's the easy part. Thanks for your comments guys. It means alot to me. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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