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What to You Can I Give?

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PhaerieChild
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0 posted 10-22-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PhaerieChild

In a misty, hazy dream, I reach for you.
Hazel eyes open sleepily, lips whisper "I love you"
The smile on your face lets me know your love.
I am so grateful for you. Thank the Lord above.

You are everything from friendship to security.
You light up my days and star-stud my dreams.
You hold me so tight and it feels sooo good.
We've been together so long. It feels as it should.

You are my lover, my outlaw, my husband, my life.
You are every heartbeat through happiness and strife.
You have been my breath when I need a voice.
You are there to support me through every choice.

You hold me up when I want to fall.
You make me feel like a porcelain doll
You laugh with me and help me live.
Tell me love, what to you can I give?


Wild Child 8/99

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

© Copyright 1999 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
merlynh
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1 posted 10-22-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for merlynh   Email merlynh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for merlynh

Nice stuff here. Great piece I'll look for more. Keep writing.
Michael
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2 posted 10-22-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, you can start by giving him this poem...it would be an honor to any man to recieve something like this. A wonderful tribute and beautiful poem.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



Ohme
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3 posted 10-22-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


This is so perfect. I'd put the poem in a place where he would easily find it and then wait for his reaction. And if you get no reaction, you didn't put it where he could find it.
Lovely, WildChild
Denise
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4 posted 10-22-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is soooooo beautiful! I'm sure he'll love it!

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Denise
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5 posted 10-22-1999 11:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sounds to me like he's getting an awful lot already. Excellent thought.
Watcher666
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6 posted 10-23-1999 04:28 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Simply beautiful!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
PhaerieChild
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7 posted 10-23-1999 08:32 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

I did give this to him and his eyes started to well up. (he's very sentimental at times for such a mean lookin' biker type) He loved it and said all he wanted was for me to love him and never stop. That's the easy part. Thanks for your comments guys. It means alot to me.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

 
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