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Am I alone?

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 10-22-1999 06:05 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

In wanting a longing glance
to feel it's only you that's he or she can see
to know the best was made of every single chance
to feel that wobble right behind your knees

To receive letters penned with ink of love
to know they'll be whispered in your ears
to know that trust is felt deep inside your heart
to know you'll share secrets without any fears

To hear the words "I love you"
when there's no one else around
to see it from deep within their eyes
and yet your ears hear no sound

To walk into your home and smell flowers
on nothing more than an ordinary day
just to say you're thought and cared for
in someone's very special way

To know that you'd share meals by candle-light
with hands that lovingly prepared
to know your worries are being thought of
to see eyes light up just because you're there

To know you think of each other as truly special friends
with a link that goes from heart to heart
to know you have each other and on that you can depend
To know, is what made you friends right from the very start....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-22-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 10-22-1999 06:24 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Rainbow, Wow, this is beautiful, love it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Julie
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2 posted 10-22-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

RainbowGirl: I loved this!

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


Michael
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3 posted 10-22-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is beautiful, Rainbow. And, no, you're not alone in feeling this way.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



RainbowGirl
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4 posted 10-22-1999 09:10 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you..and it's good to know I'm not alone..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Denise
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5 posted 10-22-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Nope! You are definitely not alone! Very lovely Rainbow!

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Denise
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6 posted 10-22-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Uh, do you mean in England, or all over the world? LOL! Kidding, Rainbow. Of course you're not alone.
Watcher666
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7 posted 10-23-1999 04:23 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely....and your not alone.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-23-1999 10:45 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful...and Rainbow, as long as you have friends, you are never alone
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9 posted 10-23-1999 03:09 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Ahem! Are you forgetting Mother Hen? *G* Never alone, dear friends... even if the hugs may be far away!
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 10-23-1999 05:46 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

dsnyder: Thanks

HUGS

Balladeer: ROFL

HUSG

Watcher: Thanks.

HUSG

Hoot: Friends sure help..

HUGS

Suthern: Thanks Mother Hen.

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
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11 posted 10-25-1999 01:00 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well Rainbow girl, am taking you back to the top with me so you will know you aren't alone ......beautiful poem
Iloveit
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12 posted 10-25-1999 01:03 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well Rainbow girl, am taking you back to the top with me so you will know you aren't alone ......beautiful poem
Alwye
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13 posted 10-25-1999 08:37 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Truly beautiful, Rainbow.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


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14 posted 10-26-1999 07:01 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Well, to be original I would have to answer yes ... but that wouldn't be true ... so, I'm dittoing everybody ... you're not alone
Severn
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15 posted 10-28-1999 03:04 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Lovely! Beautiful way with words here, RG.
ThUnDeRkYsS
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16 posted 10-28-1999 03:34 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Absolutely beautiful... Yes, one more :P lol As I grow up, I find it harder and harder to be without what you write of... I remember what it was like to have that, and I long so much to find it again But the search is long and tiresome it seems lol Truly outstanding Rainbow

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
RainbowGirl
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17 posted 10-28-1999 05:39 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks all..Guess we all share the same dreams and have the same needs

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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