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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 1999-10-22 06:05 PM


In wanting a longing glance
to feel it's only you that's he or she can see
to know the best was made of every single chance
to feel that wobble right behind your knees

To receive letters penned with ink of love
to know they'll be whispered in your ears
to know that trust is felt deep inside your heart
to know you'll share secrets without any fears

To hear the words "I love you"
when there's no one else around
to see it from deep within their eyes
and yet your ears hear no sound

To walk into your home and smell flowers
on nothing more than an ordinary day
just to say you're thought and cared for
in someone's very special way

To know that you'd share meals by candle-light
with hands that lovingly prepared
to know your worries are being thought of
to see eyes light up just because you're there

To know you think of each other as truly special friends
with a link that goes from heart to heart
to know you have each other and on that you can depend
To know, is what made you friends right from the very start....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-22-1999).]

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 1999-10-22 06:24 PM


Rainbow, Wow, this is beautiful, love it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Julie
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since 1999-08-20
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Houston, TX
2 posted 1999-10-22 08:32 PM


RainbowGirl: I loved this!

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal



Michael
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3 posted 1999-10-22 08:49 PM


This is beautiful, Rainbow. And, no, you're not alone in feeling this way.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?




RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-10-22 09:10 PM


Thank you..and it's good to know I'm not alone..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Denise
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5 posted 1999-10-22 11:07 PM


Nope! You are definitely not alone! Very lovely Rainbow!

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Denise

Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-10-22 11:40 PM


Uh, do you mean in England, or all over the world? LOL! Kidding, Rainbow. Of course you're not alone.
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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7 posted 1999-10-23 04:23 AM


Lovely....and your not alone.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-10-23 10:45 AM


Beautiful...and Rainbow, as long as you have friends, you are never alone
suthern
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9 posted 1999-10-23 03:09 PM


Ahem! Are you forgetting Mother Hen? *G* Never alone, dear friends... even if the hugs may be far away!
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 1999-10-23 05:46 PM


dsnyder: Thanks

HUGS

Balladeer: ROFL

HUSG

Watcher: Thanks.

HUSG

Hoot: Friends sure help..

HUGS

Suthern: Thanks Mother Hen.

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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11 posted 1999-10-25 01:00 PM


well Rainbow girl, am taking you back to the top with me so you will know you aren't alone ......beautiful poem
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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12 posted 1999-10-25 01:03 PM


well Rainbow girl, am taking you back to the top with me so you will know you aren't alone ......beautiful poem
Alwye
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13 posted 1999-10-25 08:37 PM


Truly beautiful, Rainbow.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller



JTF
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since 1999-08-09
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France
14 posted 1999-10-26 07:01 AM


Well, to be original I would have to answer yes ... but that wouldn't be true ... so, I'm dittoing everybody ... you're not alone
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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15 posted 1999-10-28 03:04 AM


Lovely! Beautiful way with words here, RG.
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
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16 posted 1999-10-28 03:34 AM


Absolutely beautiful... Yes, one more :P lol As I grow up, I find it harder and harder to be without what you write of... I remember what it was like to have that, and I long so much to find it again But the search is long and tiresome it seems lol Truly outstanding Rainbow

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

RainbowGirl
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17 posted 1999-10-28 05:39 AM


Thanks all..Guess we all share the same dreams and have the same needs

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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