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Kitty**
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0 posted 10-22-1999 04:58 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**


Please don't question, how I feel.
Just accept it, for being real.
Hidden motives, have I none,
though, it could have, been anyone.

I don't know why, it was you,
that makes me feel, the way you do.
But I don't question, my emotions,
I just accept, my devotion.

At night, you're with me, in my dreams.
That's when I'm most content, it seems.
If I could express, myself someway.
Then you'd know, what I'm trying to say.

But words fail me, none seem right.
They're just words on paper, that I write.
They have no meaning, they have no fire.
They can not relay, my real desire.

I want to be, within your world,
Some place inside, in which to curl.
The smallest corner, of your heart,
would be just fine, I'd never depart.

No demands, would I ever make,
What you'd willingly give, is what I'd take.
And if you hearts, too full for me.
Then let me be, a sweet memory.

So please don't question, how I feel.
Just always know, that it's for real.
When you're feeling forsaken and blue.
Always remember, that I..LOve..you!!
© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-22-1999 05:03 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Loving heartfelt emotions. Liked this much!

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Ohme
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2 posted 10-22-1999 05:29 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


I like the way you expressed the emotion. enjoyed it very much.
Lynn
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3 posted 10-22-1999 05:30 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Lots of emotions in this one. I really loved. I can say, "I know that feeling."

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-23-1999 10:23 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I agree with the above on this one. Nice display of feelings and emotions. Sometimes ours is not to question why
Denise
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5 posted 10-24-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, Kitty!

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6 posted 10-24-1999 03:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

....ooops, sorry!

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[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-24-1999).]
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