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starchild
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0 posted 10-22-1999 12:24 PM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

the world conspired against our love, my love my angel devil child
your velvet soft and heavy eyes
and my thoughts touched on your desires
we ran down to the ocean, in search of eden
we found each other by the shore
strange emotions in the darkness that was hot like the waves that called us in
and our blood filled lips ready to carress our body
down we went our insane body
a world away from jealous eyes and sleeping now
sleeping slowly and gently
we could never be this way out there
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Julie Jordan Scott
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1 posted 10-22-1999 12:42 PM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

Eloquently spoken with relatively few words....they dance on the page, delighting the senses, I can see vividly the picture you paint.

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tori
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2 posted 10-22-1999 01:17 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

I totaly agree with JJS... this is picture perfect and if you would not mind I've got a place for this one my friend.. !!
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-22-1999 03:19 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Great imagery here...liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-23-1999 10:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I liked the imagery in this piece a lot
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