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Julie Jordan Scott
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since 09-19-99
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Bakersfield, CA USA


0 posted 10-22-1999 12:17 PM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

I wish I had the words to say
What it is you need to hear
I wish I had a magic wand
To make the future clear

I wish I could take your hand in mine
And say, "Take this path, this way!"
I wish I was close enough to hug you
Whispering, "Babe, tomorrow is another day."

I wish you could see the you I see
The one that is in my heart
I wish you realized that what I hope for
Took me nearly a decade to start

I wish I could spend the weekend with you
Alone, simply you and me
We could laugh and play, sing and dance
Together, be set free

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suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 10-22-1999 12:22 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much... those wishes sound familiar! *G*
Tara Simms
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2 posted 10-22-1999 12:32 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Great one Julie. Who is this written for? Anyone I know? :-)

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
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starchild
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since 10-22-1999
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manchester, england


3 posted 10-22-1999 12:34 PM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

cool. will someone please cast a flashing glance across one of mine?
startin_fresh
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since 08-13-99
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4 posted 10-22-1999 02:42 PM       View Profile for startin_fresh   Email startin_fresh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for startin_fresh

Hi Julie:

Loved the poem. I enjoy your work. But, I am with Tara.... who is the mystery person?



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Courage is the price that life exacts
for granting peace with yourself.
--Amelia Earhart


Watcher666
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5 posted 10-22-1999 03:33 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Loked this much.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Julie Jordan Scott
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6 posted 10-22-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

Suthern, Starchild, and Watcher 666, thank you all for your kind words!

Tara and Shawn, you really think I will tell? Are you crazy?!

Neither of you know him anyway.....but he was pleased as punch that I not only wrote this, but posted it here for the world to see!

Life is truly grand!

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Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker,
but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at
http://www.5passions.com
Deli
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7 posted 10-24-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Deli   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Deli

Great poem Jules! I can picture the scenes! I love this site,,,
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