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My soul sips wine

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Seymour Tabin
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My soul sips wine

The ocean is mad today.
Wild winds add a salty spray.
My face is saline with brine.

It crashes on the beach in waves.
In rolling grasping conclaves.
Washing foam and running lines.

Then backwards rushes the flow.
Sweeping under the next row.
And dark sands leave outline signs.

It is here I wean unseen.
It is here I reap and glean.
It is here my soul sips wine.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-22-1999 11:38 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

What a vivid picture you paint here Sy...........Well Done!!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 10-22-1999 01:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper,
Thank you so much for the read and nice comment.
U K Hero
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3 posted 10-22-1999 02:05 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Imagination and atmosphere, excellent Seymour.
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4 posted 10-22-1999 03:28 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Smell that salt air! Well done!

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Seymour Tabin
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U K Hero,
My thanks for the read and comment.
Watcher,
Watching the ocean is one of my favorite things, thanks for the read.
PhaerieChild
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6 posted 10-22-1999 05:55 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This is very good. I love the imagery. I love to watch the ocean too.

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~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

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Yum Yum...where is the sea that I may go and sip wine. My soul has been wanting to "sip wine" every since I moved from Santa Rosa, Florida to Texas. Excellent work.
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8 posted 10-22-1999 06:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I like this one a lot, Sy, thanks!
Denise
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9 posted 10-22-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhhhh....the deep, majestic sea, even her fury is lovely and, like you, is where my soul longs ever to be. But in the meantime thank you for this magnificent glimpse of my most favorite place in the world.
Please pass the wine! Or is this a byob type of thing?

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Denise
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What are we drinking? I'll take a nice merlot, if you have one; they go well with seawater I've found!

This was a lovely poem, sounds like a beach 10 minutes from my place.

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Martie
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Wonderful description! I think that there's a place in California just like this. Wanta go there, gonna go there, soon.

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 10-22-1999).]
Nan
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12 posted 10-23-1999 09:13 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nice job... Watch out Sy.....
Michael
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13 posted 10-23-1999 11:20 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, Seymour,
You always have such a neat style in presenting your work. This one, too, has it very own texture to it...beautifully done and quite relaxing to read.

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Michael Anderson

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but a dream within a dream?


Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 10-23-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wildchild,
We have similar likes thanks for the comments
Poetic,
It's open house, thanks for the read.
Sunshine,
You welcome and thanks for the nice words.
Denice,
sthe wines in the cooler, I always take one with me.
Skyfyse,
As I said the wines in the cooler help yourself, thanks for the comments.
Martie,
Been to California and think I know the spot.
Nan,
You got me all wet, now I'll have to change my clothing.
Michael,
Your comments always get right to the wet of it. Thanks for the read.
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15 posted 10-23-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Sounds like a place we all should go--beautiful imagery, I could see the waves crashing on the shore. Now I feel like I'm there.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

RSEvans
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16 posted 10-23-1999 06:27 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Loved it. Just one thing...mine doesn't sip wine....it drinks tequila...

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On the wings of day-bright dreams...

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 10-23-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lizzy,
Thank you for the kind words.
RSEvans,
Tequila is good, thanks for the read and comment.
 
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