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The Lonely |
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sparrow Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33 |
The Lonely Pounding waves against the midnight soil Swooping winds across the surf One lone figure seeming to admire the view Rough shadowy rocks the greatest holding the girl Bright orange interpretation of a dying blaze Its own color melting away taking over the blue The girl's face now shows strain and determination She stands Looks up with crying eyes Spreads her arms out wide and gives herself to the Earth Night had been deceiving not giving the whole view But having been in day she knew how high it was Giving up on this world she moved on to the next Every emotion flew through her and showed in her wind blown face The complete and utter surprise of light The inability to walk The first night away The last word he'd said Somewhere from deep inside came something not expected forgiveness to the last guy left too bad it was too late She missed her mother all her life And the rest who passed on Would she get to see them or had that chance passed as well "Oh God I am sorry for thinking too fast only now do I realize what mistakes I've made please forgive me I now accept your love" Pale blue water assuming the color of night Two hands reaching out to catch the falling spirit And the words echoed from everywhere "My child you are saved." ------------------ Sparrow Hawk Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/ |
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sparrow Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33 |
well... the poem's there, but the formating didn't come out very well... When reading, act like all the spacing is reversed ;} ------------------ Sparrow Hawk Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/ |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
WOW! Very well done! Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is wonderful. If I didn't know what lonely was before, I would now. Very good! ------------------ Denise |
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