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My Totem Beast (challenge from Systematic Decay)

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 10-22-1999 04:24 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Blinding strikes
savagely
embrace prey
with fluid coils
wrapping terror
within ever-tightening
death

Cold dispassion
glitters
in soulless eyes
lips turn up
with inviting smile
as mannequin stillness
enshrouds

Elegant grace
ensconced
and enfleshed
ripples
and writhes
with effortless wildness
apparent
in each
motion

Widening maw
shows vice-like mouth
inset
with glittering needles
contrasting
the argent ebony
of glossy scale

This I am


©1999 DreamEvil

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Systematic Decay
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1 posted 10-22-1999 04:37 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

I like this very much. Thanks for actually responding to the challenge....it looks like you were the only one that decided to....**sniff, sniff**

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
thursdayschild
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2 posted 10-22-1999 07:49 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Ominous images...excellent free verse!
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-22-1999 02:51 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Excellent ....could see those eliptical eyes staring at me.

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