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Romantic Rambling

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DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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0 posted 10-22-1999 04:01 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

A smile
upon the lips
of one
as fair as you
dear Lady
is enough
to make
Nature herself
blush
at the wonder
she has wrought
upon
and within
you

'Tis words
that give
our thought
form
and deed
that gives
worth to thought
and as words
are deeds,
form is worth
My rare form
then
reflects
your worth

Laughter
from a woman
wondrous
as yourself
is reward enough
for all
my travails


©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
Posts 1312
That place with padded walls a


1 posted 10-22-1999 04:03 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

This poem is wonderful...I think you should write free verse more often.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
thursdayschild
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since 07-01-99
Posts 174
Houston, Tx.


2 posted 10-22-1999 07:52 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Wow! This is completely beautiful
Great work, as usual.
suthern
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since 07-29-99
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on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 10-22-1999 10:02 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Ramble on, DE... this is beautiful!
Nicole
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since 06-23-99
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4 posted 10-22-1999 10:04 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

nice one
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
Posts 1630


5 posted 10-22-1999 03:03 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

I love to see your romantic side! Beautiful!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
A Romantic Heart
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since 09-03-99
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Forever In Your Heart


6 posted 10-22-1999 03:15 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Dream keep dreaming your poems! Lovely!
JennyLee
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since 09-01-99
Posts 1478
Northwestern, NJ.


7 posted 10-22-1999 06:13 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Such a beautiful romantic rambling Dream!
Like very much

Jennifer
PhaerieChild
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since 08-30-99
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Aloha, Oregon


8 posted 10-22-1999 06:20 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

I love it when you write so romantically. It's always so beautiful.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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9 posted 10-22-1999 06:56 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Soul-Bro, This is beautiful, Please continue to write more of such. Love your Romantic side too Soul-brother, well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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