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Dance your hearts away..

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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-22-1999 02:31 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

Dance your hearts away
there is nothing for me
here today or anyday
with those people
dancing everywhere
to them i dont exist
just some person at the bar
sat for two hours
gets lost in the crowd
so i go to the balcony
so high i want to see them all
in plain view
as they dance..the music blaring
never even know that im staring
all alone
and they are so happy
wouldnt dream of ripping
that from their happy little hands
but ive become jealousy
envy till infinity
i want it so bad
need it to live again
but i wont take that from them..
my unknowing innocent friends
may their fun and my lonliness
never cease to end..


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Systematic Decay
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1 posted 10-22-1999 02:55 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Boy, do I ever know how you feel. I know it seems unlikely now, but try to cheer up, because in time you will be recognized as important...

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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Nothing like being alone in a crowd room.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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