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Wanting To Be Loved

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PoeticPreacher
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0 posted 10-22-1999 01:13 AM       View Profile for PoeticPreacher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit PoeticPreacher's Home Page   View IP for PoeticPreacher

Wanting to be loved

She has three wonderful joys
One girl and two boys.
You know she would be a very good wife.
But because she has children
You donít want her in your life.

You want a love unchallenged.
Brother, you heart is unbalanced.
Examine your thinking and consider your ways.
Or you might be sorry for the rest of your days.

She is wanting to be loved.

The door of her heart is
Cautiously open.
Yet she will not waste her life
Just sitting around hoping.

She is wanting to be loved, but...

By a man
who will first become her friend.
This man will not fear commitment
Nor the challenge of loveís judgement.
If you are a man, not willing of such.
Then do her a favor and stay out of touch,

Because she is wanting to be loved.
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Star Fairy 2
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1 posted 10-22-1999 01:42 AM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

very nice
compassionate

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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PhaerieChild
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2 posted 10-22-1999 02:45 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This sounds just like my friend who is a church secretary and desperately wants to be loved, but only by the right man. She too has a child (now 15) and is still searching.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Watcher666
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3 posted 10-22-1999 02:38 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done.Good read.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
PoeticPreacher
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4 posted 10-23-1999 11:48 AM       View Profile for PoeticPreacher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit PoeticPreacher's Home Page   View IP for PoeticPreacher

Thanks for taking the time to read this poet. I have seen many good women passed up by men who did not want a ready made family. I wrote this in admiration of the women who go on with their lives in spite of loneliness.
Michael
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5 posted 10-23-1999 12:34 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very sad and true thing..."the ready made family" scares off many men, but if a man's love can't reach beyond a lady to her children, I question the value of his love to begin with. Good poem, Preacher.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


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6 posted 10-23-1999 12:49 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I think Michael says it all!
A very touching and beautifully written piece Poetic Preacher....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Marilyn
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7 posted 10-23-1999 03:47 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Umm Preacher...do you know me? You have summed up my life pretty well. One girl and two boys. Waiting to be loved, but not letting my life stagnate in the waiting. What is that song? "Singing my life with his words." You have accomplished that. Thanks for the read.
U K Hero
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8 posted 10-23-1999 04:20 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

there's feeling and thought here.
Denise
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9 posted 10-23-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You do share great insights in your writings. Always a pleasure to read them!

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Denise
 
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