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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-10-22 01:01 AM

Midnight whispers seduce the night,
Cursing from the shadows of hell.
Upon us is the eve of ruby flight,
Among us now, our demons dwell.

Evil harvested upon raven wing,
Deeply infecting our innocent souls.
Of eternal grief the blackness sings,
As murderous rage frightfully grows.

Deadened limbs pierce dulled heavens,
Mournfully reaching for silenced hope.
The bitter released to commit their sins,
Immersed in madness, destined never to cope.

By tortured spirits, insanity now embraced,
Souls shackled by empty promises of light.
Blades of steel memory they once faced,
Now softened by a rich burgundy sight.

On a single night, hell's cauldron boils,
Sending a bitter rain of destruction.
Once a year may our demons tread our soil,
And force our weary souls from shining sun.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-22 01:06 AM

A very good poem here...hauntingly beautiful.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-10-22 01:29 AM

nicely done Alwye

DreamEvil
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3 posted 1999-10-22 03:35 AM

Indeed this is well done my friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Christopher

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Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 1999-10-22 03:40 AM

Bravissimo!!!

Watcher666
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5 posted 1999-10-22 02:40 PM

Liked this much! Well done

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

6 posted 1999-10-22 09:11 PM

Thank you all very much!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Michael

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7 posted 1999-10-22 09:19 PM

Oh, I just love this Dark stuff...Wonderful job here....

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

Alwye

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In the space between moments

8 posted 1999-10-25 09:38 PM

I like my dose of darkness too, Michael...thanks a lot.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

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9 posted 1999-10-25 09:43 PM

Well, you did this very well, Krista. I'd say a little darkness might flow naturally through your veins.

Elizabeth

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10 posted 1999-10-25 09:45 PM

"The darkness is the light..."--Witch's Brat
well said Alwye.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Nan

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11 posted 1999-10-26 07:06 AM

You've captured the night beautifully, as Alwye's.....

Dark Angel
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12 posted 1999-10-26 07:22 AM

Alwye loved it, well done!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Pepper
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13 posted 1999-10-26 04:40 PM

Well Done!
Alwye, I really enjoyed the imagery of this piece!

Ohme
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14 posted 1999-10-26 05:56 PM

And the dark side of me says yeah, I like it too.

Munda
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15 posted 1999-10-26 06:26 PM

Well done ! I liked this a lot. : )

Alwye

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In the space between moments

16 posted 1999-10-26 09:01 PM

Thank you so much!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

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17 posted 1999-10-26 10:35 PM

In a nutshell you put this night! well done Alwye

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