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Spring sprung (let me know what you think)

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Master
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0 posted 10-21-1999 11:36 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

*this is a totaly new style that I desided to try, let me know what you think!

Spring sprung so unexpected
From melting snow
I stood in awe
Observed perfection of its flow
So flawlessly performed
Played by the notes
Deformed in form
So worthy of great words
And yet neglected
My soul alone became affected
Pecked by the rain
In gained commotion
And grain by grain
I drained emotion
From weeping lashes
In fitting fashion,
Gentle motion,
In passing rage
And raging passion
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[This message has been edited by Master (edited 10-22-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-22-1999 02:20 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Good read,vivid imagery.Nicely done!

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Master
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2 posted 10-22-1999 03:49 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Watcher, glad you liked it!
Marilyn
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I enjoyed the imagery in this one as well. I would like to know what the challenge was in this piece?
Master
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4 posted 10-22-1999 05:04 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

There was no challege in this one, I just began to write and let the writing take me forward.
 
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