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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-21 10:54 PM


We fought so hard
We fought to escape
We fought the tyranny
We fought the bigotry
We fought for freedom
We fought for hypocrisy

We fought to become what we hated
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life is short kill quick


[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-24-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-22 06:06 PM


Cool Tom my dear. Sure is alot of fighting LOL

Jenny

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-23 10:27 AM


I like this one, but it seems unfinished...perhaps one final line

We won nothing
or We won everything

something to that effect anyway

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-10-24 08:28 PM


Great idea hoot u are right i need to add something

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life is short kill quick

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