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~~Best I Can Be~~

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tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 10-21-1999 09:17 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

I am articulate
Fragile,yet free
I am the best
Of myself I can be
I am the worrier
That fights till the end
I am compassionate
I am a friend
I love my solitude
I love company
I love the child
That I use to be
I love the young girl
Who loved with her heart
I love the lonely girl
who's heart fell apart
I love the water
And rain on my face
I love a tender, passionate embrace
I have the answers
Here inside me
I have the honesty
To love and set free
I am the daughter
That respects aging wine
I am the mother
That is tender and kind
I am the teacher
That is learning her way
I am your wife
And for that I can say;
What you have given I could never repay
I am the woman that I long to be
Because of your love, my soul is set free

For my Honey...

tori 99

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh
© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
Lynn
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1 posted 10-21-1999 09:32 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn



I liked this very much!!!!!!!!

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Denise
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2 posted 10-21-1999 09:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I absolutely loved this, tori! Such wonderful sentiments!

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Denise
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3 posted 10-21-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Tori this was just beautiful!!! Very well written! I loved it!
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 10-22-1999 08:20 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Tori: Love is being free and so beautifully captured by you.. ...hmmmm..(scratches head)

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Pepper
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5 posted 10-22-1999 08:58 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Beautiful indeed tori!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Watcher666
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6 posted 10-22-1999 02:56 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful expression of your love!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


7 posted 10-22-1999 09:23 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

24 years and it seems like yesterday.
Thanks so much for the kind words.
Michael
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8 posted 10-22-1999 09:34 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Sweet and beautiful, tori, excellent piece.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



tori
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9 posted 10-23-1999 09:42 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thank you Michael!!
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