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~~Best I Can Be~~ |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I am articulate Fragile,yet free I am the best Of myself I can be I am the worrier That fights till the end I am compassionate I am a friend I love my solitude I love company I love the child That I use to be I love the young girl Who loved with her heart I love the lonely girl who's heart fell apart I love the water And rain on my face I love a tender, passionate embrace I have the answers Here inside me I have the honesty To love and set free I am the daughter That respects aging wine I am the mother That is tender and kind I am the teacher That is learning her way I am your wife And for that I can say; What you have given I could never repay I am the woman that I long to be Because of your love, my soul is set free For my Honey... tori © 99 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I liked this very much!!!!!!!! ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I absolutely loved this, tori! Such wonderful sentiments! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori this was just beautiful!!! Very well written! I loved it! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Tori: Love is being free and so beautifully captured by you..  ...hmmmm..(scratches head)HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful indeed tori! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful expression of your love! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
24 years and it seems like yesterday. Thanks so much for the kind words. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sweet and beautiful, tori, excellent piece. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you Michael!! |
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