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Julie
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since 08-20-99
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Houston, TX


0 posted 10-21-1999 08:52 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Julie

(Dedicated to a friend)

I'm writing to you to say
how much I love you.
I saw you as you were
walking alone yesterday.

I waited for you to say
come with me-over here
I wanted to join you
to kneel and pray.

As evening grew near
I gave you a sunset
to close your day; but
only your fears appeared.

So I gave you my grace;
placing my hand upon
your head and shoulder;
you didn't recognize my face.

I watched as you fell asleep
resting beneath the covers,
so I sprinkled moonlight on your
satin pillow and angel face.

As you awakened-I saw your pain,
rushing-to face yet another day.
But you didn't notice my tears
for you, mixed in with the rain.

Again today-you looked so sad,
alone, and confused;
It makes my heartache
because I understand.

I know it's hard for I was once there.
We will always be here-Father and I;
just call our name and we will
show you truth in answer to prayer.

My words I express in the lustrous grass,
request the songs of birds that sing,
breath it into the essence of flowers,
whisper into the leaves of shimmering mass;

I perfume the mountain air,
clothe you with the warmth of the sun,
splash aura in morning dew,
placing the waves upon your hair.

My dear sweet dove
please know how much I care,
for all these things I send to you;
All messages to you of my love.

It's your decision and because of this
I will wait...because I love you, dear.



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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


© Copyright 1999 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-21-1999 08:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Julie, this is sooooooo lovely! The messages are always there, it's true! And so is He!
Very well done, Julie! Thanks for the reminder!

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Denise
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2 posted 10-21-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

The words and the images are first rate. An excellent piece of writing, Julie.
Julie
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since 08-20-99
Posts 742
Houston, TX


3 posted 10-21-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you Denise, so glad you enjoyed it.

Balladeer: My words cannot express how much it means for your kind comments, from a master indeed...thank you.

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
Southern Florida

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4 posted 10-21-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Such a heartfelt and beautiful piece Julie...I think this is my favorite of yours so far......I have made a copy for my special file, my friend .......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Julie
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since 08-20-99
Posts 742
Houston, TX


5 posted 10-21-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you so much Pepper...your words are inspiring.

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


RainbowGirl
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since 07-31-99
Posts 3167
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6 posted 10-22-1999 08:17 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Julie: You brought a lump to my throat..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Julie
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since 08-20-99
Posts 742
Houston, TX


7 posted 10-22-1999 12:02 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

((((hugs)))))RainbowGirl!

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Julie
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Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us.
>Stendhal


Munda
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since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
The Hague, The Netherlands


8 posted 10-22-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Julie ! This is truly beautiful. : )
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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9 posted 10-22-1999 02:46 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful.......

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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