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Emmy
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 194
KY

0 posted 1999-10-21 06:55 PM


Tears fall like rain
In a shower of pain
Nothing left to gain
In a pit of despair
What's one to do
when you know your love's true
but he doesn't love you
and nor does he care?
Day after day
An endless charade
I pretend I'm okay
But my heart's turned to stone
And though I've tried
My pain to hide
I'm dying inside
and I feel so alone...


© Copyright 1999 Emmy - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-10-21 07:04 PM


oh hunny... i'm feeling your pain... i'm in the same situation.. but dont worry... we'll get through this...

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-10-21 07:14 PM


Wow...did you write this poem for me or what? I am going through the same thing (that's why i write poems) but i can totally relate to this because i too love someone who doesnt love me back and it hurts, well great job and keep em coming!


caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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3 posted 1999-10-21 07:51 PM


Unrequited love is so sad...but it does produce some lovely poetry. I think perhaps because it is so very deeply felt. Good job, Emmy. I think so many can relate to your feelings and words!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
4 posted 1999-10-21 09:31 PM


Emmy....Don't worry. You're not alone. Loved the poem...

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-21 09:37 PM


The sadness in this jumps out. Very well expressed!

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Denise

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

6 posted 1999-10-22 12:52 PM


So Sad,eloquently expressed! Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Emmy
Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194
KY
7 posted 1999-10-22 07:11 PM


Thanks for your replies you guys. They're much appreciated. Hey, perhaps we should start a support group in here for all of us that seem to be constantly heartbroken? Count me in...
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

8 posted 1999-10-22 07:30 PM


Emmy this is very sad, and very well expressed. Well Done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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