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Emmy
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0 posted 10-21-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

Tears fall like rain
In a shower of pain
Nothing left to gain
In a pit of despair
What's one to do
when you know your love's true
but he doesn't love you
and nor does he care?
Day after day
An endless charade
I pretend I'm okay
But my heart's turned to stone
And though I've tried
My pain to hide
I'm dying inside
and I feel so alone...

© Copyright 1999 Emmy - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
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1 posted 10-21-1999 07:04 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

oh hunny... i'm feeling your pain... i'm in the same situation.. but dont worry... we'll get through this...

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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starboards
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since 10-14-1999
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2 posted 10-21-1999 07:14 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Wow...did you write this poem for me or what? I am going through the same thing (that's why i write poems) but i can totally relate to this because i too love someone who doesnt love me back and it hurts, well great job and keep em coming!

caroline
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3 posted 10-21-1999 07:51 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Unrequited love is so sad...but it does produce some lovely poetry. I think perhaps because it is so very deeply felt. Good job, Emmy. I think so many can relate to your feelings and words!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Lynn
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4 posted 10-21-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

Emmy....Don't worry. You're not alone. Loved the poem...

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Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Denise
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5 posted 10-21-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

The sadness in this jumps out. Very well expressed!

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Denise
Watcher666
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6 posted 10-22-1999 12:52 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So Sad,eloquently expressed! Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Emmy
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7 posted 10-22-1999 07:11 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

Thanks for your replies you guys. They're much appreciated. Hey, perhaps we should start a support group in here for all of us that seem to be constantly heartbroken? Count me in...
Dark Angel
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8 posted 10-22-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Emmy this is very sad, and very well expressed. Well Done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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