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I don't know what to do

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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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since 09-26-1999
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Rhode Island, US


0 posted 10-21-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

So much trapped in my heart,
Unable to get out;
I'm so afraid to say things;
I have so many doubts.

The few times I do try
To get things off my chest,
The most I get is laughed at,
And embarressed by the rest.

Who is there to talk to?
Who will understand?
So far I've found not many
Willing to lend a hand.

So much pain inside me,
It's tearing me apart.
So much I want to say,
How do I ever start?

I haven't figured out
Where I should begin.
But should I take a chance
Of letting it out again?

The risk is really great;
That I already knew.
But I don't know if I can...
I don't know what to do.
© Copyright 1999 Jessica Sousa - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 09-01-99
Posts 1478
Northwestern, NJ.


1 posted 10-21-1999 08:10 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Wow, Blue-eyed Wanderer such emotion. Liked this very much

Jenny
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 10-22-1999 01:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is beautifully written, sometimes we have no choice to go on, no matter how hard it may seem at first
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


3 posted 10-22-1999 01:40 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Yes, you should take the chance of letting it out again, and I hope that you do. Remember I will be on tomorrow (Friday) around the same time to continue our talk ok?? Hopefully you are sleeping now like you wanted! As for the poem, I know exactly what you mean and feel the same way ALL THE TIME myself, but remember like I said, I am always willing to listen and will not 'laugh' as you said most do. Who knows, we might have gone through/be going through similar stuff. Anyways hun, I need to go try and sleep before I have to go to work in the morning I will talk to you later! *huggles*


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Watcher666
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4 posted 10-22-1999 02:32 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

You expressed this beautifully.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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