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What will be my fate

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-21-1999 04:11 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

What will be my fate

I dwell upon relationships
Of those within my diadem.
On the sanity and the pain
Of salt and pepper dusting them.

I think on those inner prods
And the terrors and the tolls.
Judge upon the constant drives
And the tortures and controls?

I dwell upon the spawning rose
And on the thorn supported stem.
The wondrous beauty scented bud
The dangers of collecting them.

I ponder female parallels
Their sculptured forms and of their fates.
Watch their swirling impasse eddies
Avoid the thorns of dogma states.

And I puzzle, how will be my vend
And what will be my fate and end.
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snow in summer
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1 posted 10-21-1999 04:45 PM       View Profile for snow in summer   Email snow in summer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snow in summer

ahhhhhh so women hold fate in your hands do they???... when you get swept up in them... I knew it, I just knew it...! :-)) i like the image of impasse eddies.
Martie
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I read this twice and really liked it--your unusual words and style are great.
Denise
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But if it weren't for females life would be so boooooring for you guys...right...? And.....well who would keep you on your toes, keeping your brain and heart in tip-top shape....huh...well...huh?
Just kidding! Great poem!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 10-21-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Snow,
Impasse eddies can really mess you up, thanks for the comments.
Martie,
Thank you for the doubble read.
Denice,
My heart, brain and toes have settled in my finger tips.
 
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