is not the boat cast out to sea.. is not the island i appear to be is not as happy as my smile would seem is not the man so lost in your dreams.. is not the answer, not the sound is not the being that was once so profound.. is not lost inside this wall of sound...
I have a feeling there's a lot in this poem that's a little to deep for me to grasp. I feel like I'm missing out on something here! But for the most part, very well done. I love the simplicity in the way you put it together and worded it (it's more beautiful that way I think) but the meaning behind it is anything but simple. Wanna share? I'd love to hear it from you... ---Emmy