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Fright Night..... (Challenge by PDV...halloween pantoum)

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Marilyn
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0 posted 10-21-1999 01:11 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

In dark of night the wolves do howl.
The moon is full, the witches play.
The ghosts and ghouls begin to prowl.
The evil hearts enjoy the fray.

The moon is full, the witches play.
As cauldron boil with fearful brews.
The evil hearts enjoy the fray.
To stir good hearts to darker cues.

As cauldron boil with fearful brews.
An eye of Newt, a dragon's nail.
To stir good hearts to darker cues.
They find the ones that are too frail.

An eye of Newt, a dragon's nail,
A bats right wing, a puppy's foot.
They find the ones that are too frail.
Watch them all scream, covered in soot.

A bat's right wing, a puppy's foot.
All hoping for the dawn's first rays.
Watch them all scream, covered in soot.
The frail fall down and start to pray.

All hoping for the dawn's first rays.
The ghosts and ghouls begin to prowl.
The frail fall down and start to pray.
In dark of night the wolves do howl.

copywright 1999 M.H.



[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 10-21-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 10-21-1999 01:50 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is so full of the color of fear--great imagery.
Marilyn
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2 posted 10-21-1999 01:52 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Thankyou Martie....it was fun writting this piece.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-21-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Marilyn, you did a good job with this one as I've already told you. I don't know about Nan, but I give you an A
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4 posted 10-21-1999 08:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Verrrrry spooky!

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Denise
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5 posted 10-21-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marilyn, this is really very good!
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6 posted 10-22-1999 01:06 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Dark, scary, and truly awesome....

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Systematic Decay
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7 posted 10-22-1999 01:21 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

OK, I really liked it. but did it have to be a PUPPY'S foot??? I'm imagining this poor little puppy hobbling about on three legs now.....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Marilyn
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8 posted 10-22-1999 02:15 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

hoot....Thanks for the A my friend. I can't wait for yours to be posted here.


Denise....Thanks for your time and comments my friend.

Balladeer....Your comments on my work are always appreciated. The fact that you like it makes me want to create more great pieces. This one took time and effort as well as Nan's help in the workshop to master. I am learning my friend. LOL

Alwye...Thankyou.

Systematic Decay....I wrote this piece from a dark perspective. What better thing to add to a dark spell but something innocent and cute. The spell was to turn good hearts to darkness.
Watcher666
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9 posted 10-22-1999 03:30 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liiked this much.Chilling indeed!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Marilyn
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10 posted 10-22-1999 03:52 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Thankyou very much Watcher. Did you recieve my e-mail?
merlynh
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11 posted 10-22-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for merlynh   Email merlynh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for merlynh

Getting us all ready for the coming Halloween uh? Nice work.
Richard 33
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12 posted 10-22-1999 08:53 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

I got so scared, I started running,YALL SEEN
MY SOCK'S.....??????
Marilyn
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13 posted 10-22-1999 08:56 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

merlyn.....Someone had to do it my fiend...*evil grin*

Richard....Thought I heard Denise say she found them under her .......*giggle*...you naughty boy you!
Richard 33
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14 posted 10-22-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

PARDON ME? YOU FOUND THEM WHERE????
(GRINNING, SHOCKRD EXPRESSION).
Michael
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15 posted 10-22-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very well done, Marilyn.
Halloween is one of my favorite subjects...especially like the wolves part.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



Marilyn
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16 posted 10-22-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Richard.....Don't be too shocked....socks sometimes have a mind of their own. Now Denise on the other hand sould be shocked. I would be if some man's socks ended up under my...........LOL.


Micheal.....Thankyou very much. Coming from the Dark Lord it is high praise indeed.
Richard 33
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17 posted 10-22-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Marilyn I do not have an IQN number,please
Email me and explain what this is my email
adress is in my profile.
Marilyn
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18 posted 10-22-1999 09:25 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Richard...the e-mail is already sent my friend....check you mail.
Richard 33
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19 posted 10-22-1999 09:38 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Marilyn, I have insant messenger, could you
email me again, and explain to me how to do
this, or if ya want to do the email thing,
you can get email free through yahoo.
Marilyn
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20 posted 10-22-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Richard..I have Instant messanger someplace on this thing. What is your handle on there? I have to reboot then I will look for you on IM....ok?
Richard 33
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21 posted 10-22-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

cordaddy33
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22 posted 10-24-1999 02:48 PM       View Profile for Bashful   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bashful

oohhh gosh....scary...*toes playing in the dirt and wringing hands*
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