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The Vision Of The Old Eyes

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PoeticPreacher
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The Vision Of The Old Eyes

Look into the vision of those old eyes.
You値l see dark clouds and light clouds
Over sunny and taunting skies.

You値l see rainbows and sunsets,
That cover many treasures.
You値l also see the storms of life poured in
Without measure.

Look into the vision of the old eyes.
You値l see an old heart taunted by
Life痴 poking stick.
You値l also see the splendor of a
Determination that refused to quit.

Listen to the vision of those eyes
For this is what they speak to you...
Before you can progress,
You must let me through.
© Copyright 1999 PoeticPreacher - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-21-1999 08:39 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yo...Rhyim' Reverend,.....well done...well thought out....words to be taken seriously.
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2 posted 10-21-1999 01:29 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I liked it, read it again, and liked it even more. Well done!
Martie
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There is a lot to be leaned from old eyes. Loved the line, "life's poking stick". Well done!
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Very Well Done!
Liked this alot.....thanks for sharing Preacher........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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I enjoyed this one very much!

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6 posted 10-21-1999 08:06 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I throughly enjoyed this.

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7 posted 10-22-1999 08:09 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Brilliant..

HUGS

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8 posted 10-22-1999 02:43 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Good read! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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