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being in love shouldnt feel like this!

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amber
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0 posted 10-21-1999 01:35 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

you pull me close,
and say your sorry,
but somehow it grows old,
you say its nothing,
not to worry,
but i never know whats left untold.

i let you hold me,
but i know inside,
that it shouldnt hurt this much,
my heart is confused,
but still i try,
kept safe within your touch.

i asked you questions,
but you cannot speak,
and it leaves worries in my mind,
you say you love me,
but my soul is weak,
wondering whats left unsaid this time.

i tried to forget,
but it still hurts to much,
the look in your eyes,
as you glance away,
i see you welcoming her touch,
and my faith in you starts to die.

i get tired of the same old games,
but you still need to play them,
im sorrys dont seem to mean as much,
still you find the need to say them.

im broken down from all the worries,
of where you are and who your with,
its getting hard to keep on trying,
being in love shouldnt feel like this.




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im always the one to say im sorry, but have never once forgave myself......
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Ixtab
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1 posted 10-21-1999 02:03 AM       View Profile for Ixtab   Email Ixtab   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ixtab

I sympathize with you;
wondering what's left unsaid this time, beautifull choice of words.

Ixtab
Watcher666
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2 posted 10-21-1999 02:06 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sad,beautiful poem.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Munda
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3 posted 10-31-1999 05:01 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Sad and beautiful indeed.
JOY 14
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4 posted 10-31-1999 05:10 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

I liked it, a very good poem. It shows a lot of feeling.
Denise
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5 posted 10-31-1999 05:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

No, it shouldn't! Time to move on!

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Denise

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6 posted 10-31-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

my beautiful sister, inside and out, we've grown together- been through our whole lives. you should know that love isn't supposed to hurt but often times does. just remember that only you know what feels right inside, and you know i'll be here for you either way. lots of sisterly love.
Justina
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7 posted 10-31-1999 06:58 PM       View Profile for Justina   Email Justina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justina

I totally feel you! And it sucks! But just remember, there is someone out there who deserves you!
amber
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8 posted 11-02-1999 01:57 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all so much and i know your right, but im still stupid i guess thinking i can change the way he loves me, but i know i cant, its jsut so much easier to keep hoping because i love him so much i dont want to lose him despite everything weve been through and all the nights ive cried myself to sleep, he still owns my heart and i can never change that. thank you all agian.
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