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Follow me into forever............

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jennysbeau1
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Cornelius, Oregon, USA


0 posted 10-21-1999 12:12 AM       View Profile for jennysbeau1   Email jennysbeau1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jennysbeau1

Hello, this is a poem to my angel, my fiance who lives a thousand miles away....a little background: we met over a year ago in a chat room on aol, we conversed for 4 months before we met....during those months we fell in love with who we were on the inside,we finally met Christmas day 1998...the title comes from the last line of my marriage proposal to her...."My angel, will you follow me into forever and marry me?" This is a true story.........


For Jennifer

Follow me into forever.......

Throughout my years of wondering,
enduring my endless grief
Will I find my angel?
I was strong in this belief.

On a lonely night not long ago,
your soul that was forsaken
traveled across the distance
and my love was then awakened.

My heart began to yearn for you,
your soul was just like mine
Could you be the angel
thats been elsewhere all this time?

I knew I had to meet you
to believe our love was true,
come to me my angel,
is it really really you?

When we shared that perfect kiss
that glorius Christmas day,
my heart cryed out "My Angel"
and I knew our love would stay.

The lonely man that I once was
is no more it seems,
For I have found my angel
The semblance of my dreams.

So, I take you to be my bride
one love they cannot sever,
Take my hand my angel
and follow me into forever.

Love,
Terry

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Remember...write what you love..and love what you write...Terry

[This message has been edited by jennysbeau1 (edited 10-21-1999).]
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Severn
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1 posted 10-21-1999 12:14 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

A lovely read - and welcome to the home of poets!
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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2 posted 10-21-1999 01:59 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A wonderful poem welcome!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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3 posted 10-21-1999 02:05 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

lovely poem.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-21-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How sweet..welcome to passions
jennysbeau1
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Cornelius, Oregon, USA


5 posted 10-21-1999 10:18 AM       View Profile for jennysbeau1   Email jennysbeau1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jennysbeau1

Thank you all for the welcome......
I appreciate your sentiments and your critiques......thank you
Munda
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since 10-08-1999
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The Hague, The Netherlands


6 posted 10-21-1999 10:20 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This poem really speaks to me, as I know exactly what you are talking about. : ) I like the way you translated this. : ) Thanks.
A Romantic Heart
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since 09-03-99
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Forever In Your Heart


7 posted 10-21-1999 10:58 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

A Beautiful poem,lovely, she is a blessed angel to have a poem so deep written to her, and to have had such a romantic proposal!
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


8 posted 10-21-1999 11:13 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This poem smiles. Much happiness to both of you!
JennyLee
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Northwestern, NJ.


9 posted 10-22-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Very good read and very loving! Liked much.

Jennifer D.

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-22-1999).]
PhaerieChild
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since 08-30-99
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Aloha, Oregon


10 posted 10-22-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This is very heartwarming!! Really enjoyed it! And welcome to Passions

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Denise
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11 posted 10-22-1999 09:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Terry. I think you and Jenny are very very lucky to have found each other. What a beautiful sentiment...follow me into forever......Love it! And welcome to Passions!

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Denise
Michael
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12 posted 10-22-1999 09:17 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, Terry,
This is wonderful. believe me when I say many, many people here will appreciate this piece...and I for one, having my love 2,000 miles away from me right now. I hope to have a similar ending as you've shown us here. Beautiful poem.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



debbiek
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13 posted 09-18-2001 03:21 PM       View Profile for debbiek   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for debbiek

Terry,

     Your words said all I have wanted to say to my soul mate that I met 11 months ago on the internet.  We have met, after the first kiss we knew that it was forever.  He is 14,000 mile away but in my heart forever.  We will be together soon forever and I sent him a copy of your words knowing full well that they will touch his heart as they have touched mine.  Thank you.

DPK and Boat


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