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The Robot..........from #1 for my new friends

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Skyfyre
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25 posted 10-22-1999 11:03 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Do I qualify as a "new friend"?

This was really a very interesting piece, and it struck close to home with me. The man you described in this poem was my father (well figuratively if not literally). It brought a tear to my eye as I have never tried to imagine his side of the sad story of my parents' divorce. Perhaps this was it.

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.
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26 posted 10-24-1999 01:17 PM       View Profile for snow in summer   Email snow in summer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snow in summer

what a way to paint with words!
Blue Eyed Wanderer
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27 posted 10-24-1999 02:13 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

Wow. That's the only word I can think of to describe this. It was so wonderful, and brought a tear to my eye. Everything of your's that I've read is always so great and perfect, and I can only wish to someday be half as good as you are.
~Jess~
 
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