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Let me think of you purely...

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Master
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0 posted 10-20-1999 10:53 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Let me think of you purely
Just the way I remember
In my dreams, gliding truly
Far from sorrow and grief
Leave the doubts for later
As for now, love me tender
Mix your soul with the vapor
And allow me to breathe

Once again Iím with you
On one page; in one phrase
From one point of view
We are reading our fate
Skimming letters for love
Which exists in one gaze
We donít know what we have
Thatís what makes it so great


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Lynn
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1 posted 10-20-1999 11:13 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

*sigh* so true...so true...so true...and beautiful. I loved it. The last to lines especially

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-21-1999 10:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully spoken Master and
"We donít know what we have
Thatís what makes it so great"
No truer words were ever spoken!
Pepper
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3 posted 10-21-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Beautifully said Master, and I too,
especially like the ending lines......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Master
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4 posted 10-21-1999 07:29 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

THanks guys, glad you enjoyed it!
caroline
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5 posted 10-21-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

hmmmm....do you ever write any bad poetry?

I haven't seen any of it! Like this one lots, I do!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Master
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6 posted 10-21-1999 07:43 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

me? bad poetry? nahhh not my style *S*
Watcher666
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7 posted 10-22-1999 12:24 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful and sensual.Loved it!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
starchild
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8 posted 10-22-1999 12:42 PM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

take a look at my work,
i think it is good
it is different
 
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