Let me think of you purely...

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Open Poetry #3

Let me think of you purely...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-20 10:53 PM

Let me think of you purely
Just the way I remember
In my dreams, gliding truly
Far from sorrow and grief
Leave the doubts for later
As for now, love me tender
Mix your soul with the vapor
And allow me to breathe

Once again I’m with you
On one page; in one phrase
From one point of view
We are reading our fate
Skimming letters for love
Which exists in one gaze
We don’t know what we have
That’s what makes it so great

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

1 posted 1999-10-20 11:13 PM

*sigh* so true...so true...so true...and beautiful. I loved it. The last to lines especially

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-21 10:07 AM

Beautifully spoken Master and
"We don’t know what we have
That’s what makes it so great"
No truer words were ever spoken!

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-10-21 10:15 AM

Beautifully said Master, and I too,
especially like the ending lines......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-10-21 07:29 PM

THanks guys, glad you enjoyed it!

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

5 posted 1999-10-21 07:38 PM

hmmmm....do you ever write any bad poetry?

I haven't seen any of it! Like this one lots, I do!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 1999-10-21 07:43 PM

me? bad poetry? nahhh not my style *S*

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-10-22 12:24 PM

Beautiful and sensual.Loved it!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

starchild
Member

since 1999-10-22

Posts 59
manchester, england

8 posted 1999-10-22 12:42 PM

take a look at my work,
i think it is good
it is different

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