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Open Poetry #3

Sometimes

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-20 08:51 PM

Sometimes

Sometimes it's not enough-
a cloudless sky
on a moonlit night
awaiting the arrival
of a flawless sunrise.
sometimes it isn't enough-
a springtime shower
on a desert bloom
parched from the heat
of a prolonged drought.
sometimes it is not enough-
to say I'm sorry
for a deed undone...
as an afterthought
becomes the guilt of omission.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-10-21 12:04 PM

Interesting linking of natural images with guilt. I like it!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-21 09:43 AM

Nice one here! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-04 04:21 AM

sigh

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-05-04 04:45 PM

RobertB~
Ahhhhh, now this is a poet I miss VERY MUCH~

Hope you will consider coming back and *gifting* us with one of your gems~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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