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RobertB
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Sometimes

Sometimes it's not enough-
a cloudless sky
on a moonlit night
awaiting the arrival
of a flawless sunrise.
sometimes it isn't enough-
a springtime shower
on a desert bloom
parched from the heat
of a prolonged drought.
sometimes it is not enough-
to say I'm sorry
for a deed undone...
as an afterthought
becomes the guilt of omission.


RB



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Interesting linking of natural images with guilt. I like it!
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Nice one here! Liked this much!

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RobertB~
Ahhhhh, now this is a poet I miss VERY MUCH~

Hope you will consider coming back and *gifting* us with one of your gems~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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