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Master
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0 posted 10-20-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Forgive the forgotten for unworthy words
Whose verses remain unrehearsed to this day
Whose inspirited spirits evoked no applause
Forgive them and live and believe in your way

Remember outnumbered who stood for a cause
Not destined to stand, they defended tomorrow
They followed a hollow belief in their course
Remember and live and honor their sorrow


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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Beautiful work, as always...

I had to read it a couple of times....But even though it is very eloquent...I don't understand...It seems to me like some of the lines have absolutely nothing to do qith each other...just random rhyming thoughts...could you elaborate a bit?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Watcher666
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2 posted 10-21-1999 09:25 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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EXCELLENT master, a most well thought out and crafted piece. Well done!!
WhtDove
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4 posted 10-21-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was good. Took couple times to read it, but I like it. Lots of thought here!
 
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