Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
Preacher, only because you sincerely asked for criticism will I make these comments. The thought behind the poem and the message expressed by it are very good. The grammatical mistakes, however, damage it.
"he felled into her bed"..."it could have went" sound bad through their incorrectness. Since you have chosen to write in rhyme, you need a proper meter, or rhythym, to the poem. That is also lacking. If the poem were not as good as it is, these things might not stand out so obviously, but, since it is a very good poem, it deserves to be treated well. Keep it up. You've got good ideas.